Illustrative sample report

Homepage teardown: late-payment follow-up SaaS.

This fictional example shows the specificity and format of a Conversion Desk quick-win review. It is not presented as client work.

Context

Product: RelayPay, a fictional tool that automates polite invoice follow-ups for small agencies.
Target customer: agency owners managing collections themselves.
Primary goal: start a free trial.
Priority issue 1

The hero describes a category, not a buying reason.

Observed friction: “The all-in-one receivables platform for modern teams” could describe many products and asks agency owners to translate the value themselves.

Recommended rewrite:

Stop chasing overdue agency invoices by hand.

RelayPay sends polite, automatic follow-ups from your own inbox, tracks payment promises, and stops when the invoice is paid.

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Priority issue 2

The strongest differentiator arrives too late.

Observed friction: Sending reminders from the owner’s own inbox is the clearest reason to choose the product, but it is buried below multiple feature sections.

Recommended change: Place a three-point trust strip directly under the hero: “Sent from your inbox”, “Edit before sending”, and “Stops automatically when paid”.

Priority issue 3

The only next step requires too much commitment.

Observed friction: A free trial still asks the visitor to connect financial and email accounts before they fully trust the product.

Recommended CTA: Keep “Start free trial” primary and add “See a sample follow-up sequence” as the secondary CTA.

Recommended experiment

Test specificity before redesigning anything.

Variant: Replace the broad hero with the rewritten agency-specific hero and add the three-point trust strip.

Primary measure: visitor-to-trial-start rate.

Decision: keep the variant if it improves qualified trial starts without increasing early abandonment.

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